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I want to be in Swiss because many people say Swiss is the best place ever that they've visited. So it became one of my bucket list to go Swiss. And it was really cold, while it's really hot today in Korea. Actually, I reserved the semi pakage Europe tour with a friend recently. I'll go there before graduation, it's last opportunity to go abroad for a long time.

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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
I've seen videos about Switzerland, and I can say that it is really a beautiful country.
_T. SHAY^^
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I want to be in Swiss because many people say Swiss is the best place ever that they've visited. 
>>I want to be in Switzerland because many people say Switzerland is the best place that they've every visited.
So it became one of my bucket list to go Swiss. 
>>So it became one of the items in my bucket list to go to Switzerland.
And it was really cold, while it's really hot today in Korea. 
>>And it's really cold while it's really hot today in Korea.
Actually, I reserved the semi pakage Europe tour with a friend recently. 
>>Actually, I recently booked a semi-package Europe tour with a friend.
I'll go there before graduation, it's last opportunity to go abroad for a long time.
>>I'll go there before graduation, and it's the last opportunity to go abroad for a long time.
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