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1) b 2) a 3) b 4) c 5) d 6) a

It's wonderful Monday Jeny!
I hope it will be a good start for the week.
These days, I have a stress for my business.
because, i got a smp skill but always problem is marketing i think
I never on my business before so, It's not easy
But, i have to do this step by step !!
Always not easy fitst time right?
Thank you Jeny see you on Wednesday !

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Hello Jon!!
It is always not that easy to run a business, especially during the first months.
Have the courage to do your best and don't give up. It is also the same in studying a language. Determination is a must.
Have a great day.
T.Jeny

1) b 
>>a.  By dint of
2) a 
>>correct
3) b 
>>correct
4) c 
>>a.  At the top of
5) d 
>>b.  At variance with
6) a
>>correct
It's wonderful Monday Jeny!
>>It's a wonderful Monday Jeny!
I hope it will be a good start for the week.
>>correct
These days, I have a stress for my business.
>>correct
because, i got a smp skill but always problem is marketing i think
>>I Have a SMP skill but I think I am always having a problem in marketing.
I never on my business before so, It's not easy
>>I have never run a business before so it's not easy.
But, I have to do this step by step !!
>>correct
Always not easy fitst time right?
>>And it is always not easy to start a business, right?
>>Yes, it takes time for a business to be established, so be strong and hang on. Have patience!
Thank you Jeny see you on Wednesday !
>>correct
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