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What is the importance of taking care of nature? What can we do to take care of it?

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I think taking care of nature is like taking care of our future.
In terms of its importance, it is very important.
This is because nature is hard to go back to the old days when it is damaged of destroyed. Also, nature affects animals and plants so much that if nautre is damaged or destroyed, animals and plants that were easily seen around us can disappear, resulting in other animals and plants disappearing continueously.
What we can do to take care of nature is very simple.
If you don't throw away trash anywhere or not only picking it up and throwing it in the trash can, but also doing good recycling can be a way. In addition, planting plants or trees for nature can also be good thing.

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Hello! 

Thank you for your homework!
You expressed some really thoughtful ideas about the importance of nature and how we can protect it. Well done! ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina



I think taking care of nature is like taking care of our future.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Caring for nature is the same as caring for our future.

In terms of its importance, it is very important.
>> It is extremely important when it comes to its impact.

This is because nature is hard to go back to the old days when it is damaged of destroyed. 
>> This is because once nature is damaged or destroyed, it¡¯s hard to restore it to its original state.

Also, nature affects animals and plants so much that if nautre is damaged or destroyed, animals and plants that were easily seen around us can disappear, resulting in other animals and plants disappearing continueously.
>> Nature greatly affects animals and plants, so if it is damaged or destroyed, species that were once common can disappear, which may cause a chain reaction of further extinctions.

What we can do to take care of nature is very simple.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Taking care of nature doesn¡¯t require much effort.

If you don't throw away trash anywhere or not only picking it up and throwing it in the trash can, but also doing good recycling can be a way.
>>  You can help by not littering, picking up trash, and recycling properly.

In addition, planting plants or trees for nature can also be good thing.
>>  In addition, planting trees or other plants is also a good way to help nature.
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