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Can you share about the most memorable commercial you have ever seen? Why?

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When I was young, I saw the one commercial and still remember it.
That commercial never told about product and servieces.
It only gave some image cuts and brand name and was brocasted for few months.
People had curiosity, because the commercial never gave any informations.
I remember that commercial.

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Hi there! It¡¯s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

When I was young, I saw the one commercial and still remember it.
>> When I was young, I saw a commercial that I still remember to this day.

That commercial never told about product and servieces.
>> The commercial never mentioned any product or service.

It only gave some image cuts and brand name and was brocasted for few months.
>> It only showed a few image clips and the brand name, and it was broadcast for a few months.

People had curiosity, because the commercial never gave any informations.
>> People were curious because the commercial didn¡¯t provide any information.

I remember that commercial.
>> I still remember that commercial.
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