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Why is it hard for some people to apologize?

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Because before apologizing, someone who did something wrong should recognize their fault. Someone who has high self-esteem is hard to recognize their fault. They are thinking, if they recognize their fault, it meats that they are losing. It also makes them to apologize.

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Good evening, Hwanny! ^^,)

Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish you composition.

People find it difficult to apologize for a variety of reasons, most frequently because they want to preserve their ego or self-image or because they are afraid of coming seen as weak. Other factors that may contribute to difficulty apologizing include pride, a need for empowerment, and a fear of vulnerability.

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Because before apologizing, someone who did something wrong should recognize their fault.
>>> It's because, before apologizing, someone who did something wrong should recognize their fault.
>>> OR: It is because, before apologizing, someone who has done anything wrong must admit their error.

Someone who has high self-esteem is hard to recognize their fault.
>>> Someone who has high self-esteem finds it hard to recognize their fault.
>>> OR: Someone with great self-esteem finds it difficult to admit their flaws.

They are thinking, if they recognize their fault, it meats that they are losing. It also makes them to apologize.
>>> They are thinking if they recognize their fault, it means that they are losing. It also makes them apologize.
>>> OR: They believe that if they admit their mistakes, they would lose. It also prompts them to apologize.

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