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Early this year, My boss said, " I want you to work for our company working philosophy and culture. So Please decrease marketing and public relations tasks. We will recruit new member for PR & Marketing team." But, My boss and I didn't keep any appointment. I think deeply for our company working culture and philosophy. We have to build good working culture and settle down to all members in our company.

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Hello there, Ella!

A pleasant and professional working culture is the dream of all employees. However, this is not easily achieved since workers have different characters and values they bring to work. Thus, a vision and a mission guides everyone in the company reach their goals and aspirations.

I am sure that you work hard to live by the philosophy and work culture of your company. It takes time but it is possible.

Thank you for sending this very meaningful answer. Your grammar has improved so much in writing from the last answer you wrote. Write more to analyze your grammar and rectify your patterns. Overall, great job!

See you in class.

-T. Donna~

Early this year, My boss said, " I want you to work for our company working philosophy and culture. So Please decrease marketing and public relations tasks. We will recruit new member for PR & Marketing team." But, My boss and I didn't keep any appointment. I think deeply for our company working culture and philosophy. We have to build good working culture and settle down to all members in our company. 
>> Early this year, My boss said, " I want you to work for our company with its philosophy and culture. He asked to decrease the marketing and public relations tasks. We will recruit a new member for the PR & Marketing Team." But, my boss and I didn't keep any appointment. I think deeply of our company's working culture and philosophy. We have to build a good working culture and settle down with all members in our company. 
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