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The Islands of Gunsan

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I don't know the differences between the islands in Gunsan because we were in the biggest island, Seonyudo. It is developed as a tourist attraction, so it's road is paved and we drove to every place. On that island, we enjoyed a beautiful sand beach and a pebble beach. Some of us took zipline.Several islands are connected to Gunsan city, but Seonyudo is the most popular.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
Thank you for telling me about Seonyudo. It's actually nice to know that you can travel there by car because the roads are paved, so I think that makes it very convenient for travelers to visit.
- T. Caitlyn 
I don't know the differences between the islands in Gunsan because we were in the biggest island, Seonyudo. 
>> I don't know the differences between the islands in Gunsan because we were on the biggest island, Seonyudo.
It is developed as a tourist attraction, so its road is paved and we drove to every place. 
>> CORRECT
On that island, we enjoyed a beautiful sand beach and a pebble beach. 
>> CORRECT
Some of us took zipline.
>> Some of us took a zipline.
Several islands are connected to Gunsan city, but Seonyudo is the most popular.
>> CORRECT
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