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When I was young, I wanted to buy a small and cute car. But now I know that those are often ignored by others in Korea because others think the drivers of those are women. And I don¡¯t want to be ignored by them, so I¡¯ll buy just basic sedan not small one. I also want it to protect me because I can¡¯t trust my driving skills.

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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing. 
I can relate. I wanted to have the Volkswagen Beetle when I was young. 
_T. SHAY^^
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When I was young, I wanted to buy a small and cute car. 
>>Correct
OR: As a child, I dreamed of owning a small, cute car.

But now I know that those are often ignored by others in Korea because others think the drivers of those are women. 
>>Correct
OR: But now I know that those are often ignored by others in Korea because most people think women drive those cars. 

And I don¡¯t want to be ignored by them, so I¡¯ll buy just basic sedan not small one. 
>>And I don¡¯t want to be ignored by them, so I¡¯ll just buy a basic sedan, not a small one. 
I also want it to protect me because I can¡¯t trust my driving skills.
>>Correct
OR: I also want to get a car that can protect me because I don't trust my driving skills.


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