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Can you talk about a book that you recently read? What was it about, and what did you learn from it?

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I recently am reading a book about many country's sucess and failure.
This book tell "why some country is rich, but another country is poor?" even they have same ancestor and live near. why?
This book claim that political rule is key factor of sucess.
I learn a lot from this book.

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Hi there! It¡¯s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I recently am reading a book about many country's sucess and failure.
>> I am currently reading a book about the successes and failures of many countries.

This book tell "why some country is rich, but another country is poor?" even they have same ancestor and live near. why?
>> This book explores the question, 'Why are some countries rich while others are poor, even though they share the same ancestry and are located near each other?'

This book claim that political rule is key factor of sucess.
>> The book argues that political institutions are a key factor in a country's success.

I learn a lot from this book.

>> I¡¯m learning a lot from it.
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