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What are some ways companies contribute to helping society? Explain.

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There could be various ways companies can contribute to society. To begin with, companies can return some of their profits to the community. For example, they can allocate a small percentage of their earnings to construct public amenities or fund scholarships. In my hometown, LG Electronics, one of the most renowned corporations in Korea, built a theme park for residents and earned a positive reputation. Secondly, companies can adjust their policies to align with social values, such as using eco-friendly materials and cooperating with local subcontractors. Lastly, companies can deliver beneficial messages to the public. By showing their agendas through ads or festivals, they can attract attention and engage people in their campaigns. Even if they don't utilize the methods mentioned above, their presence alone can benefit society. Good examples include local businesses that can contribute to regional economic development, or products and services generated through corporate competition.

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Hi Isaac!
Thank you for your composition today.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
There could be various ways companies can contribute to society. 
>> Correct
To begin with, companies can return some of their profits to the community. 
>> To begin with, companies can give a part of their profits to the community. 
For example, they can allocate a small percentage of their earnings to construct public amenities or fund scholarships. 
>> Correct
In my hometown, LG Electronics, one of the most renowned corporations in Korea, built a theme park for residents and earned a positive reputation. 
>> Correct
Secondly, companies can adjust their policies to align with social values, such as using eco-friendly materials and cooperating with local subcontractors. 
>> Correct
Lastly, companies can deliver beneficial messages to the public. 
>> Correct
By showing their agendas through ads or festivals, they can attract attention and engage people in their campaigns. 
>> By sharing their goals through ads or festivals, they can attract attention and engage people in their campaigns. 
Even if they don't utilize the methods mentioned above, their presence alone can benefit society. 
>> Correct
Good examples include local businesses that can contribute to regional economic development, or products and services generated through corporate competition.
>> Correct
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