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I dropped by my friend's new cafe on my way home. Since it was the weekend, the place was packed with customers. She was running the whole place alone and I could see how hectic it was - so I jumped in to help without thinking twice.
I spent about three hours straight washing dishes and getting ingredients ready.
It was definitely tiring, but I was happy I could help out.
I felt proud of helping her, and I was grateful to be part of such an important moment in her new beginning.

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Hello, Ms. Judy! It really shows the kind of friend you are: thoughtful, supportive, and ready to act without hesitation. Jumping in to help, especially when things are chaotic, takes a lot of empathy and selflessness. Three hours of nonstop work isn¡¯t easy, but I can imagine how meaningful it must¡¯ve felt to be there for your friend during such a big step in her life.
-T. Sonny
I dropped by my friend's new cafe on my way home. 
>>Correct!
Since it was the weekend, the place was packed with customers. 
>>Correct!
She was running the whole place alone and I could see how hectic it was - so I jumped in to help without thinking twice.
>>She was running the entire place by herself, and I could see how hectic it was, so I jumped in to help without thinking twice.
I spent about three hours straight washing dishes and getting ingredients ready.
>>I spent about three straight hours washing dishes and preparing ingredients.
It was definitely tiring, but I was happy I could help out.
>>Correct!
I felt proud of helping her, and I was grateful to be part of such an important moment in her new beginning.
>>Correct!
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