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What do you prefer- inviting a friend over to your house or going/visiting a friend\'s place? Why?

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Inviting a friend to my house and going/visiting a friend's place can both be burdensome.
Because if I invite my friend to my house, I have a lot to take care of, and when I go to or visit my friend's place, I have a lot to think about.
But if I have to choose between the two, I prefer to go to my friend's palce or visit.
First of all, be sure to think that if I invite a friend to my house, I always think that my friend can refuse. Conversely, if I am invited to a friend's place, I will feel good and feel that I have been chosen. In addition, if I want to invite a friend to my house, I will need to clean the house and prepare a lot of food and other things, but I am going/visiting a friend's place only requires thinking about what gifts to prepare and how to act.

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Hello! 

Thank you for submitting your answer. Great job on making your essay. ^^ 
I can totally relate to the answer you have given. I would actually choose the same. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina

Inviting a friend to my house and going/visiting a friend's place can both be burdensome.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Whether I invite a friend or go to their place, it can be stressful.

Because if I invite my friend to my house, I have a lot to take care of, and when I go to or visit my friend's place, I have a lot to think about.
>> If I invite my friend over, I have a lot to take care of. And when I visit their place, I have a lot to consider as well.
>> Or: Hosting means a lot of preparation, and visiting someone else also comes with things to consider.

But if I have to choose between the two, I prefer to go to my friend's palce or visit.
>> But if I have to choose between the two, I prefer visiting my friend's place

First of all, be sure to think that if I invite a friend to my house, I always think that my friend can refuse. 
>> First of all, whenever I invite a friend over, I always consider the possibility that they might decline.

Conversely, if I am invited to a friend's place, I will feel good and feel that I have been chosen. 
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: On the other hand, if a friend invites me over, I feel happy and valued.

In addition, if I want to invite a friend to my house, I will need to clean the house and prepare a lot of food and other things, but I am going/visiting a friend's place only requires thinking about what gifts to prepare and how to act.
>> In addition, inviting a friend over means I have to clean the house and prepare food and other things, while visiting a friend¡¯s place only requires me to think about what gift to bring and how to behave.
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