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What other cultural practices do you do in the Summer?

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We have four seasons. It is very hard to stand hot weather in summer. Old people think that they need to win hot, so they did special activity. They went to valley, and had fun fishing, swimming, eating foods with their friends or neighbor.
We like to eat cold noodle in summer. It is very important to make meat stock. It is boiled long time put in meat, vegetable and fruits. After boiled and freezing it. It is very dilicious. I think that I want to eat cold noodle, this is what summer has come.

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Good morning, Ms. Eva!
Global warming has caused the temperature to rise, and if we know how to beat the heat, people will always enjoy summer.
Have a fun Friday!
Aki~

We have four seasons.
>>> CORRECT!

It is very hard to stand hot weather in summer. Old people think that they need to win hot, so they did special activity.
>>>  It is very hard to stand the heat of summer. Old people think that they need to beat the heat, so they do special activities.

They went to valley, and had fun fishing, swimming, eating foods with their friends or neighbor.
>>> They went to the valley, and had fun fishing, swimming, eating food with their friends or neighbors.

We like to eat cold noodles in summer.
>>> CORRECT!

It is very important to make meat stock. It is boiled long time put in meat, vegetable and fruits.
>>>  It is very important to make meat stock. The meat is boiled for a long time, with vegetables and fruits

After boiled and freezing it.
>>> After boiling, we freeze it.

It is very dilicious. 
>>> This is very delicious.

I think that I want to eat cold noodle, this is what summer has come.
>>> I think that I want to eat cold noodles, this is what we do when summer comes.
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