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I'm sorry not to check which day of week when I uploaded the homework yesterday. So I uploaded your yesterday homework at a section of Wednesday.
Yes, I believe in love at first sight and I always wait for that kind of love. Actually, each people is attractive to the person whose appearance is their type. If the other person felt same thing, they would fall in love and date together. After dating, they may not fit together or may get married. But it's just another problem.

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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Yes, I think the idea of "love at first sight" is really fascinating.
_T. SHAY^^
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I'm sorry not to check which day of week when I uploaded the homework yesterday. 
>>I'm sorry for not checking what day of the week it was when I uploaded the homework yesterday.
So I uploaded your yesterday homework at a section of Wednesday.
>>So I uploaded your homework from yesterday under the Wednesday section.
Yes, I believe in love at first sight and I always wait for that kind of love. 
>>Yes, I believe in love at first sight, and I'm always waiting for that kind of love.
OR: I do believe in love at first sight, and I still hold on to the of experiencing it one day.
Actually, each people is attractive to the person whose appearance is their type.
>>
Actually, each person is attractive to the person whose appearance is their type.
OR: Actually, everyone is attractive to someone who finds their appearance appealing.
If the other person felt same thing, they would fall in love and date together. 
>>If the other person felt same way, they would fall in love and start dating. 
After dating, they may not fit together or may get married.
>>After dating, they may realize they're not a good match, or they may decide to get married.
But it's just another problem.
>>Correct
OR: However, that's another part of the story.
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