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What do you think is the best way to build a closer relationship with someone?

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2025-06-20 103

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Well, that's very difficult question. HAHAHA.
I think the best way to build a closer relationship with someone depends on his or her personality.
But the basic thing is that you have to spend a lot of time with him or her. Assuming that you spend a lot of time, the method can very depending on the person's personality.
If the person is a bright and outgoing personality, he or she can build closer relationships by having many conversations and doing many activities.
On the contrary, if the person has a shy and introverted personality, he or she should give him or her time to adjust to the situation and make sure he or she can get to know each other slowly. Otherwise, a person with a shy and introverted personality can easily feel burdened.

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Hi, Yun! 

Thank you for sending your answer. 
I agree that it is a difficult question. XD 
However, I really like your answer, and I truly agree. 
Getting close to someone depends on their personality since we cannot approach someone just like how we do with others. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina 



Well, that's very difficult question. HAHAHA.
>> Well, that's a very difficult question. HAHAHA.

I think the best way to build a closer relationship with someone depends on his or her personality.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: How you build a relationship really depends on the person.

But the basic thing is that you have to spend a lot of time with him or her. 
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Spending time together is the foundation.

Assuming that you spend a lot of time, the method can very depending on the person's personality.
>> Assuming you spend a lot of time together, the approach can vary depending on the person¡¯s personality.

If the person is a bright and outgoing personality, he or she can build closer relationships by having many conversations and doing many activities.
>> If the person has a bright and outgoing personality, they can build closer relationships through conversations and shared activities.

On the contrary, if the person has a shy and introverted personality, he or she should give him or her time to adjust to the situation and make sure he or she can get to know each other slowly. 
>>  On the other hand, if the person is shy and introverted, it's important to give them time to adjust and get to know you slowly.

Otherwise, a person with a shy and introverted personality can easily feel burdened.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Without patience, introverted people might feel pressured.
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