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I think I'm half introvert and half extrovert person. When I'm in a situation that I have to socialize, I can change myself to be seemed like an extrovert person. However, since I'm also half introvert there is energy limitation for me to act as an extrovert.
When socializing with people, making people to enjoy the conversation is important. I think I'm learning and practicing how to make enjoyable conversation these days. Until college I rarely met new people and even new people were in similar age with me. However, as I enter the college, the range of people that I meet increased and I also realized that socializing skills, especially toward new people, are essentially required to work and engage in the group. To sum up, I'm in a process of training myself to become a good conversation partner, and I believe I have enhanced since I resolved to improve myself.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. WooIn! Based on what you described earlier, “ambivert” is the perfect term for you. It’s impressive that you can adapt and step into that social role when needed, even if it takes effort. It’s also great that you’re actively working on your conversation skills. You're clearly making progress, and the best part is, you're doing it with intention.

-T. Sonny

I think I'm half introvert and half extrovert person. 

>>I think I’m half introvert and half extrovert.

When I'm in a situation that I have to socialize, I can change myself to be seemed like an extrovert person.

>>When I’m in a situation where I need to socialize, I can adjust myself to seem like an extrovert.

However, since I'm also half introvert there is energy limitation for me to act as an extrovert.

>>However, since I’m also part introvert, I have limited energy for acting that way.
When socializing with people, making people to enjoy the conversation is important. 

>>When socializing, I think it’s important to make others enjoy the conversation.

I think I'm learning and practicing how to make enjoyable conversation these days. 

>>These days, I’ve been learning and practicing how to have more enjoyable conversations.

Until college I rarely met new people and even new people were in similar age with me. 

>>Until college, I rarely met new people, and even when I did, they were usually around the same age as me.

However, as I enter the college, the range of people that I meet increased and I also realized that socializing skills, especially toward new people, are essentially required to work and engage in the group. 

>>But after entering college, the range of people I meet has widened, and I’ve realized that social skills, especially with new people, are essential for working and participating in group settings.

To sum up, I'm in a process of training myself to become a good conversation partner, and I believe I have enhanced since I resolved to improve myself.

>>To sum up, I’m in the process of training myself to become a good conversation partner, and I believe I’ve improved since I decided to work on it.

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