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Do you think making mistakes is an important part of learning to make good decisions? Why?

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Making mistakes is an important part of learning to make good decisions. First, mistakes allow us to have an objective perspective. someone who has never made any mistakes can't clearly recognize their own weaknesses and problems. In addition, making mistakes helps us make decisions and pursue our goals more boldly and courageously. By making many mistakes, we can learn that all outcomes from our decisions can't be perfect. Paradoxically, numerous mistakes help us stay confident and bold. For instance, I used to try to avoid speaking during presentations since I was afraid of misspeaking whenever I had to do it. However, I gained courage and improved my presentation skills after admitting that results don't always come out perfectly, even if I prepare thoroughly and let go of my desire to always do well. Lastly, self-reflection and improvement acquired from trial and error help us become better people. In this way, by reducing similar mistakes, we can make better decisions.

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Hi Isaac!
You still made a great effort.
Let's discuss some improvements in class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Making mistakes is an important part of learning to make good decisions. 
>> Correct
First, mistakes allow us to have an objective perspective. 
>> Correct
someone who has never made any mistakes can't clearly recognize their own weaknesses and problems. 
>> Someone who has never made any mistakes can't clearly recognize their own weaknesses and problems. 
In addition, making mistakes helps us make decisions and pursue our goals more boldly and courageously. 
>> Correct
By making many mistakes, we can learn that all outcomes from our decisions can't be perfect. 
>> Correct
Paradoxically, numerous mistakes help us stay confident and bold. 
>> Correct
For instance, I used to try to avoid speaking during presentations since I was afraid of misspeaking whenever I had to do it. 
>> Correct
However, I gained courage and improved my presentation skills after admitting that results don't always come out perfectly, even if I prepare thoroughly and let go of my desire to always do well. 
>> Correct
Lastly, self-reflection and improvement acquired from trial and error help us become better people. 
>> Correct
In this way, by reducing similar mistakes, we can make better decisions.
>> Correct
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