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Do you think expensive gifts are always better than simple ones? Why or why not?

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Expensive presents are not always a better choice than simple ones. Touching someone's heart doesn't depend on the price but on a sincere heart. Even if a gift is not high in price, a gift can still be meaningful for someone by choosing appropriate ones. No matter how expensive a gift is, it will not be valuable if it is not something the other person truly needs. For example, flowers are not costly yet they can move people's hearts deeply. Suppose that you give a luxurious present to someone. The person in a formal relationship who receives the gift might feel uncomfortable. Therefore, affordable gifts are usually more appropriate unless it is a special case. In conclusion, an excellent gift is not about price, but about a sense of thoughtfulness.

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Hi Isaac!
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~~ Teacher Sharon
Expensive presents are not always a better choice than simple ones. 
>> Correct
Touching someone's heart doesn't depend on the price but on a sincere heart. 
>> Correct
Even if a gift is not high in price, a gift can still be meaningful for someone by choosing appropriate ones. 
>> Even if the price of a gift is not high, it can still be meaningful for someone by choosing an appropriate one.
No matter how expensive a gift is, it will not be valuable if it is not something the other person truly needs. 
>> Correct
For example, flowers are not costly yet they can move people's hearts deeply. 
>> Correct
Suppose that you give a luxurious present to someone. 
>> Correct
The person in a formal relationship who receives the gift might feel uncomfortable. 
>> Correct
Therefore, affordable gifts are usually more appropriate unless it is a special case. 
>> Correct
In conclusion, an excellent gift is not about price, but about a sense of thoughtfulness.
>> Correct
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