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Do you think your workplace provides enough safety training? Why or why not?

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Do you think your workplace provides enough safety training? Why or why not?

The company give workers learn about safety training.
So, we usually watch the training class every quater in a year.
After this class, we have to pass the exam.
We don't have the case of not pass the exam.
Because we must particiate in the class untill passing the test.
The company always reminds us enough saftey training.
So we couldn't remove the safety.

Hi, Elly.
Today is extremly hot.
I'm sure that we can melt on the road
if we stay outside over 5 minute without any cool things.
But, I always thanks to live in here.
Have a nice day.
See you in next class.

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Hi Stella,

Happy Monday! As always, thank you for taking the time to answer this essay. :)
I think this safety training is very important, especially since it can be dangerous to work in cold environments.
I know you'll do well on the test and can pass it on the first try. You¡¯ve got this! :)
Oh no, summer heat! Stay hydrated! You should visit a swimming pool with your family to cool off.
Have a great day at work tomorrow. See you! :)

- Teacher Elly~


The company give workers learn about safety training.
>> The company gives workers safety training.

So, we usually watch the training class every quater in a year.
>> 
So, we usually attend the training session every quarter.

After this class, we have to pass the exam.
>> CORRECT

We don't have the case of not pass the exam. Because we must particiate in the class untill passing the test.
>> There's no case of someone failing the exam, because we must participate in the class until we pass the test.
 
The company always reminds us enough saftey training. So we couldn't remove the safety.
>> 
The company always reminds us about the importance of safety training, so we can¡¯t ignore it.
OR >> The company always reminds us about the importance of safety training, so we can¡¯t forget it.

Hi, Elly.
>> CORRECT

Today is extremly hot.
>> 
Today is extremely hot.

I'm sure that we can melt on the road if we stay outside over 5 minute without any cool things.
>> 
I'm sure we could melt on the road if we stay outside for more than 5 minutes without anything to keep us cool.

But, I always thanks to live in here.
>> But I'm always thankful to live here.

Have a nice day.
>> CORRECT

See you in next class.
>> See you in the next class.
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