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Where is the best place to hang out with friends? Why?

작성자: 이*윤
2025-06-30 240

회원님의 영작문

Well, the best place to hang out with friends seem to depend on my age.
When I was a student, I went to a comic book cafe where I could read comic books or go to a movie because my friends had something in common : cartoons, movies, idols and song.
However, there were many idols and friends who liked singing, so most of them went to singing room to sing or went to the k-pop album store to listen to music.
Now, I think the best place to hang out with my friends is a cafe.
Originally, I like quiet places, coffee, and talking.
When I meet my friends, I have a conversation with a cup of coffee for a long time, because the cafe is the best place to do all that. Also, I don't have to worry about it because it's a place where I can enjoy the best effect for my cost and I can be anywhere. I can stay for a long time while having a cup of coffee and delicious desserts, and there is a cafe anywhere, so I can go without worrying.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi! 

Thank you for sending me your answer. 
I really appreciate it. I think it is true that most of us enjoy hanging out at certain places because of what we like doing at a certain age or point in our lives. 
I'm glad that you were able to find it these days at cafes. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


Well, the best place to hang out with friends seem to depend on my age.
>> Well, the best place to hang out with friends seems to depend on my age.

When I was a student, I went to a comic book cafe where I could read comic books or go to a movie because my friends had something in common : cartoons, movies, idols and song.
>> When I was a student, I went to a comic book cafe where I could read comics or watch movies, because my friends and I shared interests like cartoons, movies, idols, and songs.

However, there were many idols and friends who liked singing, so most of them went to singing room to sing or went to the k-pop album store to listen to music.
>> However, many of my friends liked singing and idols, so most of them went to karaoke rooms or visited K-pop album stores to listen to music.

Now, I think the best place to hang out with my friends is a cafe.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: These days, I prefer hanging out at cafes with friends.

Originally, I like quiet places, coffee, and talking.
>> I've always liked quiet places, coffee, and good conversation.

When I meet my friends, I have a conversation with a cup of coffee for a long time, because the cafe is the best place to do all that. 
>> When I meet my friends, we usually have long conversations over coffee, because a cafe is the perfect place for that.

Also, I don't have to worry about it because it's a place where I can enjoy the best effect for my cost and I can be anywhere. 
>> Also, I don’t have to worry much because cafes are affordable and available almost anywhere.

I can stay for a long time while having a cup of coffee and delicious desserts, and there is a cafe anywhere, so I can go without worrying.
>> I can stay for a long time enjoying coffee and desserts, and since cafes are everywhere, I don’t have to worry.
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