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Which word would best describe you as a worker/student?

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I hope the world becomes like that someone can get as much as they put in hard work. There are so many people, who want to get money without effort. So they try to find illegal ways when they need money. In the end, they can make money more than those who put in hard work with follow legal ways. It makes that nobody put in effort.

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Good evening, Hwanny!^^

I consider myself to be a flexible worker. You will be more willing to try new things and discover more ways to improve your productivity at work if you take a more flexible attitude to your work. Additionally, flexibility enhances engagement, creativity, communication, and productivity, all of which contribute to higher output.

I will see you later in class. Have a good day!

__T. Mayleen :)


I hope the world becomes like that someone can get as much as they put in hard work.
>>> I hope the world becomes like that, where someone can get as much as they put in hard work.
>>> OR: I wish the world becomes one in which everyone can obtain as much as they work for.

There are so many people, who want to get money without effort. So they try to find illegal ways when they need money.
>>> There are so many people who want to get money without effort. So they try to find illegal ways when they need money.
>>> OR: There are a lot of people who wish to make money without working. So when they need money, they look for unlawful ways to get it.

In the end, they can make money more than those who put in hard work with follow legal ways.
>>> In the end, they can make more money than those who put in hard work and follow legal ways.
>>> OR: In the end, they can earn more money than others who work hard and follow legal procedures.

It makes that nobody put in effort.
>>> It makes it so that nobody puts in effort.
>>> OR: It ensures that no one makes an attempt.
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