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People used to like unique appearance, for example, ancient Venus which is the symbol of beauty looks fat because there were a few fat people. But nowadays, people like skinny appearance because we can't easily gain skinny bodies. So people might like small people in the future, the average of height increases every year.

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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
I couldn't agree more.
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People used to like unique appearance, for example, ancient Venus which is the symbol of beauty looks fat because there were a few fat people.
>>People used to value unique physical traits. Venus, the goddess of beauty, is often shown with a fuller, curvier figure--possibly because such traits were less common.  

But nowadays, people like skinny appearance because we can't easily gain skinny bodies.
>>Correct
OR: Today, beauty standards often favor thinness--perhaps because a slim body is now more difficult to maintain. 

So people might like small people in the future, the average of height increases every year.
>>In the future, shorter people might be more admired especially as average height increases every year.
OR: Just as fuller figures were once admired and thin bodies are idealized today, future beauty standards might shift again. If average height continues to rise, being shorter could one day be considered more attractive. 
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