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In my office, almost all members use tablets and notebooks. And when we are meeting or presenting, we connect to the notebook from a huge monitor. It has been a long time since we last needed the handout. However, I sometimes print the press release to check for defects.

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Hello, Ella!

It is wonderful to see you here on the Composition Page again with your homework answer.

Minimizing the use of paper will be beneficial to the environment. A monitor is very useful and it is more convenient for many to use and look at.

Congratulations for constructing all of your sentences correctly! The more you write, the better you become in grammar.

See you here again on this page soon!

-T. Donna~

In my office, almost all members use tablets and notebooks. And when we are meeting or presenting, we connect to the notebook from a huge monitor. It has been a long time since we last needed the handout. However, I sometimes print the press release to check for defects.

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