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It is true that we are receiving help from AI in many feild.

AI robots do easy and fast many works that we do difficult or impossible things.

But we should realize their dangers and side effects.

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Ms. Lily!
While AI is becoming more powerful and capable, I think people shouldn't rely too much on AI but to be honest, it can't be avoided.
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It is true that we are receiving help from AI in many feild.
>>> It is true that we are receiving help from AI in many fields.
>>> It is true that we are receiving help from AI in many areas.

AI robots do easy and fast many works that we do difficult or impossible things.
>>> AI robots do many easy and fast things that we humans thought that they are difficult or impossible.

But we should realize their dangers and side effects.
>>> CORRECT!
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