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It is true that we are receiving help from AI in many feild.

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Ms. Lily!
While AI is becoming more powerful and capable, I think people shouldn't rely too much on AI but to be honest, it can't be avoided.
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It is true that we are receiving help from AI in many feild.
>>> It is true that we are receiving help from AI in many fields.
>>> It is true that we are receiving help from AI in many areas.

AI robots do easy and fast many works that we do difficult or impossible things.
>>> AI robots do many easy and fast things that we humans thought that they are difficult or impossible.

But we should realize their dangers and side effects.
>>> CORRECT!
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