¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

What\'s your favorite book? Who\'s your favorite author?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: Â÷*Áø
2025-07-06 213

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

My favorite book is 'romance of the three kingdoms' because it is history and novel book so it is very fun but characters name is hard and it is long so it is have a part.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Here's your corrected composition, Yale.  Please take a look at the corrections below. See you later! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                              

                                       What's your favorite book? Who's your favorite author?



My favorite book is 'romance of the three kingdoms' because it is history and novel book so it is very fun but characters name is hard and it is long so it is have a part.
>>> My favorite book is Romance of the Three Kingdoms because it's a fascinating blend of history and fiction. It's really enjoyable, though the character names are difficult to remember and the book is quite long, so it's divided into parts.
>>> OR: Romance of the Three Kingdoms is my favorite book. It's a fun mix of historical events and storytelling. That said, the names are hard to follow, and the book is pretty long, which is why it's split into sections.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
143512 Do you think fashion shows a person¡¯s personality? What kind of... ±Ç*Áø ¿Ï·á 2025-04-09 1
143511 Do you think culture shock is a good or bad experience? Why?... À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2025-04-09 0
143510 Do you think fashion shows a person¡¯s personality? What kind of... À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2025-04-09 0
143509 4/8 Hoework ±Ç*ºó ¿Ï·á 2025-04-09 2
143508 How can people maintain good health? ¿©*Âù ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 974
143507 Which part of your childhood you wish you could change? Á¶*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 1055
143506 . ±è*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 1170
143505 What is the purpose of art? What are the reasons we visit art... ¼­*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 1
143504 What\'s the national habitat of humans? Describe. Â÷*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 977
143503 s Á¶*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 1093
143502 Whenever you want ÀÓ*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 968
143501 homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 1
143500 How do you stay organized when you have a lot of tasks to do? À±*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 2
143499 Do you think public transport should be free for everyone? Á¶*¸í ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 4
143498 My homework ÀÌ*µµ ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 991
143497 Do you consider yourself knowledgeable about current events? Why... ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 1187
143496 homework ÀÌ*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 1160
143495 How does God¡¯s love shape the way you see yourself and others? ³ë*ö ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 1075
143494 Homework ÀÌ*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 1154
143493 Why do you think that the lack of time still yields average... ¼Û*Áø ¿Ï·á 2025-04-08 1

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04