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Q : What do you like and dislike most about summer?

A : I like summer vacation and a watermelon. In korea, Most companies give summer vacation to employees. So, I like summer because of this reason. However, as summer is really hot, I dislike summer as well. Also, I dislike insects in summer especially mosquitos.

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Good afternoon, Eddy!^^

Although summer is frequently linked to pleasant weather and outdoor pursuits, it also has several disadvantages. While there are clearly benefits to warm weather, longer days, and recreational activities, there are also common drawbacks, such as intense heat, the possibility of sunburn, and higher energy costs from air conditioning.

Thank you for finding time to answer your homework. See you later in class!

__T. Mayleen :)


I like summer vacation and a watermelon.
>>> I like summer vacation and watermelon.
>>> OR: I enjoy summer vacations and watermelons.

In korea, Most companies give summer vacation to employees. So, I like summer because of this reason.
>>> In Korea, most companies give summer vacation to employees. So, I like summer because of this reason.
>>> OR: In Korea, most employers provide summer vacation to their employees. So I like summer for this reason.

However, as summer is really hot, I dislike summer as well. Also, I dislike insects in summer especially mosquitos.
>>> However, as summer is really hot, I dislike summer as well. Also, I dislike insects in summer, especially mosquitos.
>>> OR: However, I dread summer since it is really hot. I also loathe insects in the summer, particularly mosquitoes.
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