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What do you like and dislike most about summer?

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My favorite season is fall. When I was a student, I loved summer, because of the summer vacation. These days, I still get time off, but I have to go somewhere for my family. The time off isn't for me. And, I hate the weather in summer. Korea broke the record, Today is the hottest day.
Humidity is also high. Today was hot and uncomfortable. As a result, I don't like summer.

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Good afternoon, Hwanny!

Prioritize drinking enough water, look for cool places, dress comfortably, and avoid physically demanding activities during the warmest hours of the day to beat the summer heat. Additionally, you can take cool baths or showers, use fans and air conditioning, and consume cooling foods like salads and fruits.
Avoid extended sun exposure, and don't forget to use sunscreen.

Have a good day!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


My favorite season is fall. When I was a student, I loved summer, because of the summer vacation.
>>> My favorite season is fall. When I was a student, I loved summer because of summer vacation.
These days, I still get time off, but I have to go somewhere for my family. The time off isn't for me. 
>>> These days, I still get time off, but I have to go somewhere with my family. The time off isn't really for me. 
And, I hate the weather in summer. Korea broke the record, Today is the hottest day.
>>> I dislike the summer weather. In Korea, there's a new record because today is the hottest day.
Humidity is also high. Today was hot and uncomfortable. As a result, I don't like summer.
>>> Humidity is also high. Today was hot and uncomfortable. As a result, I don't like summer anymore.
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