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Q : What adjectives, in your opinion, best describe your dream job?

A : In my opinion, the word 'relaxed' can describe my dream job. Since I want to retire this job early, I want to be my own building owner. I know it is hard to own my own building. But it is just a dream.

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Good afternoon, Eddy!^^

The notion of a "dream job" is one that many people find appealing; it is frequently defined as a job that combines skills, passion, and a sense of purpose, enabling one to flourish and find fulfillment. The industry or job title may differ, but the basic idea is that one should match their career with their lifestyle and true self.

Thank you so much for answering your homework. I will see you later in class!^^

Have a good day!

__T. Mayleen :)


In my opinion, the word 'relaxed' can describe my dream job.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: In my perspective, the word'relaxed' best describes my ideal employment.
Since I want to retire this job early, I want to be my own building owner.
>>> Since I want to retire from this job early, I want to be my own building owner.
>>> OR: Since I plan to retire early from this work, I want to buy my own building.
I know it is hard to own my own building. But it is just a dream.
>>> I know it is hard to own a building, but it is just a dream.
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