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I have been absent to the work because I was not feeling well.

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I have been absent to the work because I was not feeling well. These days I have many tasks and do overtime everyday. I'm just barely holding on to caffeine and nutritional supplement. I could fall apart soon. So I have to search time of rest.

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Hello, Ella!

All of us fall ill some time in a year. Hence, we need ample rest to recuperate. I hope you can stay away from too much caffeine and stay naturally healthy. Get plenty of rest whenever you can.

Your sentences below have very good quality. The tense is consistent and your vocabulary is refined. Great job!

See you again here on this composition page soon.

-T. Donna~

I have been absent to the work because I was not feeling well. These days I have many tasks and do overtime everyday. I'm just barely holding on to caffeine and nutritional supplement. I could fall apart soon. So I have to search time of rest.
>>  I have been absent from work because I was not feeling well. These days, I have many tasks and do overtime everyday. I'm just barely holding on to caffeine and nutritional supplements. I could fall apart soon. So I have to search time of rest. Very good sentences!


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