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How can schools create a more engaging learning experience for students?

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The times are constantly changing, and accordingly, education systems must adapt to meet new demands. Existing educational methods involve students attending lectures in a passive and one-way manner. Traditionally, teachers conducted classes, and students jotted down notes and memorized lesson content for an exam. Since the 2010s, however, our society has stepped into the era of information. So today, those who seek out and utilize information on their own can be competitive. As a result, the Ministry of Education in Korea should nurture more creative and proactive individuals. For this reason, it goes without saying that educational policymakers should implement dramatic reforms in the learning environment. There are various ways of enhancing the quality of education, such as increasing the frequency of debates and presentations or introducing cutting-edge digital devices in the classroom. In conclusion, these ways will help foster a more engaging learning experience for students.

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The times are constantly changing, and accordingly, education systems must adapt to meet new demands. 
>> Correct
Existing educational methods involve students attending lectures in a passive and one-way manner. 
>> Correct
Traditionally, teachers conducted classes, and students jotted down notes and memorized lesson content for an exam. 
>> Correct
Since the 2010s, however, our society has stepped into the era of information. 
>> Correct
So today, those who seek out and utilize information on their own can be competitive. 
>> Correct
As a result, the Ministry of Education in Korea should nurture more creative and proactive individuals. 
>> Correct
For this reason, it goes without saying that educational policymakers should implement dramatic reforms in the learning environment. 
>> Correct
There are various ways of enhancing the quality of education, such as increasing the frequency of debates and presentations or introducing cutting-edge digital devices in the classroom. 
>> Correct
In conclusion, these ways will help foster a more engaging learning experience for students.
>> Correct
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