¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

My homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*µµ
2025-07-13 163

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

HOMEWORK: Is volunteering worth the time it takes?

I think volunteering is worth it. I don't think it's worth it when it comes to money, but I think it's enough in that there are many things that can be done to develop different ideas.
Many things are important in our lives, and money is important, but that is not all.
Money doesn't determine everything. We should be able to find a value that is more important than money. And I think it's volunteering that can help us find it.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello, Alex!
Thank you for sharing your insights about the given question. ^^
Chammy
I think volunteering is worth it. 
OR
>> I believe it's worthwhile to volunteer. 
I don't think it's worth it when it comes to money, but I think it's enough in that there are many things that can be done to develop different ideas.
OR
>> Financially speaking, I don't think it's worth it, but I do think it's sufficient because there are several ways to come up with new ideas.
Many things are important in our lives, and money is important, but that is not all.
OR
>> Money is vital, but it's not the only thing that matters in our lives.
Money doesn't determine everything.
OR
>> Money cannot be the sole determining factor.
We should be able to find a value that is more important than money.
OR
>> There must be a value that surpasses monetary worth.
 And I think it's volunteering that can help us find it.
OR
>> And I believe that we can find it through volunteering.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
144017 What invention would you like to invent? ÀÌ*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2025-05-09 753
144016 I did not receive 6.5 so I am sending new questionnaires... ÀÌ*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2025-05-09 750
144015 I did not receive 6.5 so I am sending new questionnaires... ÀÌ*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2025-05-09 719
144014 I did not receive 6.5 so I am sending new questionnaires... ÀÌ*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2025-05-09 824
144013 parents affect their children ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2025-05-09 716
144012 ¤Ó Á¶*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2025-05-09 653
144011 I am using 4 planner on my office desk. ÀÌ*Çü ¿Ï·á 2025-05-09 880
144010 Do you think getting along with other people is something you... ¿©*Âù ¿Ï·á 2025-05-09 0
144009 Indi film ¾ç*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2025-05-09 840
144008 . ±è*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2025-05-09 730
144007 What is your best memory from Children¡¯s Day? À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2025-05-08 1
144006 homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2025-05-08 1
144005 Write about your trip to Seoul during the long holiday? Â÷*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2025-05-08 741
144004 ¤Ó Á¶*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2025-05-08 820
144003 Can you think of a time when you misunderstood someone because... À±*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2025-05-08 0
144002 What would you do if a neighbor is partying until the wee hours? ÀÌ*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2025-05-08 807
144001 If you could build your dream city, what would be in it? ±Ç*Áø ¿Ï·á 2025-05-08 2
144000 opic questions ¼®*Çö ¿Ï·á 2025-05-08 867
143999 homework ÀÌ*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2025-05-08 832
143998 clean ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2025-05-08 2

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04