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Talk about other "walking on eggshells" experiences.
I experienced walking on eggshells when I did a part time job. Two seniors are same age and older than me. But one of them was the oldest worker except for the owner. So she sometimes scold the other worker and he said her gossip to me. But I didn't want to agree that and I avoided answering that. After that, I tried to read his face and walked on eggshells.

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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
I usually try to avoid gossip, too.
_T. SHAY^^
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I experienced walking on eggshells when I did a part time job. 
>>Correct
OR: I felt like walking on egg shells when I had a part-time job.

Two seniors are same age and older than me.
>>Two seniors are the same age and older than me.
But one of them was the oldest worker except for the owner.
>>But one of them was the oldest worker, except for the owner.
OR: But of them was the oldest worker among all of us.
So she sometimes scold the other worker and he said her gossip to me. 
>>So she sometimes scolded the other worker, and he shared her gossip with me.
But I didn't want to agree that and I avoided answering that.
>>But I didn't want to agree with that, and I avoided answering that.
After that, I tried to read his face and walked on eggshells.
>>After that, I always tried to read his face and walked on egg shells.
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