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I currently work as a public officer. I started this job in 2011, and now I am working as a team leader in my department. Working as a public officer has both positive and negative effects on me.
On the positive side, I love my job because I have always dreamed of serving my country.
However, I also feel the desire to test my abilities in a wide range. I believe the private sector offers to me more opportunities and to earn a higher income

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Good day, Ben!
I think I understand you. People working for the government have the same thinking as you; however, what keeps them from doing that job is the stability and security. Take note, the government has different agencies that can be challenging as well.
Thank you for sharing.
T. Aki~

I currently work as a public officer.
>>> CORRECT!

I started this job in 2011, and now I am working as a team leader in my department.
>>> CORRECT!

Working as a public officer has both positive and negative effects on me.
>>> CORRECT!

On the positive side, I love my job because I have always dreamed of serving my country.
>>> CORRECT!

However, I also feel the desire to test my abilities in a wide range.
>>> CORRECT!

I believe the private sector offers to me more opportunities and to earn a higher income.
>>> I believe the private sector offers me more opportunities to earn a higher income.

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