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Do you prefer learning alone or in a group? Explain why.

작성자: 조*수
2025-07-15 213

회원님의 영작문

starting today, I started learning Japanese at a language academy. Before today's class, I preferred learning alone because I could concentrate better and not be interrupted. So I realized some practical advantages of group learning. First of all, one can get more motivation and maintain a steady drive from people who have similar level. If you are alone to study, It is impossible to notice how much effort other people are putting into their studies. Conversely, you can receive accurate feedback about your academic performance, by comparing objective study time with others. This can prevent you from being lazy. On top of that, you can question or communicate with group members., which makes studying more enjoyable. As I practice my English speaking everyday with teacher Sharon, learning a language with others increases my effectiveness of studies.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Isaac!
There's certainly room for improvement regarding your work today.
Try to check the suggestions.
I will ask you some clarifications during our class tomorrow.
Don't work too hard and get enough rest.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
starting today, I started learning Japanese at a language academy. 
>> Starting today, I started learning Japanese at a language academy. 
Before today's class, I preferred learning alone because I could concentrate better and not be interrupted. 
>> Correct
So I realized some practical advantages of group learning. 
>> However, I realized some practical advantages of group learning. 
First of all, one can get more motivation and maintain a steady drive from people who have similar level. 
>> First of all, one can get more motivation and maintain a steady drive from people who are on a similar level. 
If you are alone to study, It is impossible to notice how much effort other people are putting into their studies. 
>> If you study alone, it is impossible to be aware of how much effort other people are putting into their studies. 
Conversely, you can receive accurate feedback about your academic performance, by comparing objective study time with others. 
>> Conversely, you can receive accurate feedback about your academic performance, by making objective comparisons with others.
This can prevent you from being lazy. 
>> Correct
On top of that, you can question or communicate with group members., which makes studying more enjoyable. 
>> On top of that, you can ask questions or communicate with group members, which makes studying more enjoyable. 
As I practice my English speaking everyday with teacher Sharon, learning a language with others increases my effectiveness of studies.
>> As I practice speaking in English with Teacher Sharon every day, learning a language in a group setting will increase my effectiveness in studying.
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