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Would you rather miss your flight or lose your luggage? Why?

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Missing my flight is better than losing my luggage. Because if I miss my flight, I can still make a plan B. It will be my choice. However, If I miss my luggage, I can do nothing. I just wait for my luggage. When I was in Australia. I met a Swiss man. He was in Australia, but His luggage wasn't. He couldn't anything. He just stayed in his room to pass the time. He was worried about the luggage.

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Good evening, Hwanny!

Losing luggage and missing a flight are two distinct travel issues, each with viable remedies and a range of repercussions. You will usually have to rebook if you miss a flight, which could result in extra expenses and delays. Even though losing luggage might be upsetting, the airline will typically try to find and return your possessions, albeit you might have to put up with some short-term problems.

Thank you so much for this composition. Have a good night!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


Missing my flight is better than losing my luggage.
>>> CORRECT
Because if I miss my flight, I can still make a plan B. It will be my choice.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Because even if I miss my flight, I can prepare a backup plan. It will be my decision.
However, If I miss my luggage, I can do nothing. I just wait for my luggage.
>>> However, if I lose my luggage, I can do nothing. I'd just have wait for my luggage to arrive.
When I was in Australia. I met a Swiss man. He was in Australia, but His luggage wasn't.
>>> When I was in Australia. I met a Swiss man. He was in Australia, but his luggage wasn't.
>>> When I was in Australia. I met a Swiss man. He arrived in Australia, but his luggage didn't.
He couldn't anything. He just stayed in his room to pass the time. He was worried about the luggage.
>>> He couldn't do anything. He just stayed in his room to pass the time. He was worried about his luggage.
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