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Q) What did you enjoy most about the dinner?
A) Every Wednesday or Tuesday, when we play screen golf, we choice a restaurant. So, I always look forward to what I'm going to eat today. Today we ate Chinese food, but it was not good. It was very spicy and didn't taste good. We decided to seriously consider to go again that restaurant. And we drank a little bit of soju, It's for relaxation. Usually I don't like drinking, but sometimes I enjoy it when I'm with my family or with my best friends at the dinner

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Hi Sungho, you did a good job describing your usual routine and sharing what happened with your meal and drinks. Your ideas are clear and easy to follow. I also appreciate that you kept your sentences still shorter this time, which makes your writing easier to understand. Keep practicing this clear style. I will keep doing my best to help you express your thoughts naturally and correctly in English. Great effort by the way!

~ T. Lia

Every Wednesday or Tuesday, when we play screen golf, we choice a restaurant.
>> Every Wednesday or Tuesday, when we play screen golf, we choose a restaurant.

So, I always look forward to what I'm going to eat today.
>> So, I always look forward to what I¡¯m going to eat that day.

Today we ate Chinese food, but it was not good.
>> CORRECT

It was very spicy and didn't taste good.
>> CORRECT

We decided to seriously consider to go again that restaurant.
>> We decided to seriously consider whether to go to that restaurant again.

And we drank a little bit of soju, It's for relaxation.
>> We also drank a little bit of soju for relaxation.

Usually I don't like drinking, but sometimes I enjoy it when I'm with my family or with my best friends at the dinner.
>> Usually I don¡¯t like drinking, but sometimes I enjoy it when I¡¯m with my family or my best friends at dinner.



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