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The climate of this summer in Korea is very unpredictable. Rainy season usually starts in the middle of July, but it started in June. And the season was over in a short period. After the shortened monsoon season, extremely hot weather started. This week, we have had much rain. Really unpredictable! However, this week is cooler than last year, so many people turn off their air conditioner. Our family did,too. During summer, most people rely on air conditioners very much. With strange weather, they turn them on and off repeatedly.

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Good day, Gi Yean! 
I think that not only in Korea, but all over the world, we can say that the weather is unpredictable. As we know, this is indeed a result of climate change. It's nice to hear that this year's weather is considered cooler and better in Korea, and that some people are already tolerant of the hot weather. But still, like we said, it's unpredictable, and we don¡¯t know what might happen until the end of the season.
- T. Caitlyn 
The climate of this summer in Korea is very unpredictable. 
>> CORRECT
Rainy season usually starts in the middle of July, but it started in June. 
>> CORRECT
And the season was over in a short period. 
>> The season ended in a short period.
After the shortened monsoon season, extremely hot weather started. 
>> CORRECT
This week, we have had much rain. 
>> CORRECT
Really unpredictable! 
>> It¡¯s really unpredictable!
However, this week is cooler than last year, so many people turn off their air conditioner. 
>> However, this week is cooler than last year, so many people have turned off their air conditioners.
Our family did, too. 
>> CORRECT
During summer, most people rely on air conditioners very much. 
>> During summer, most people rely heavily on air conditioners.
With strange weather, they turn them on and off repeatedly.
>> CORRECT
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