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These days, many young people want to become influencers. They like trying new things and sharing their lives on social media. This can be a good thing. because they set to experience more and connect with others.
However, there is a downside.
Some people try too hard to look perfect online. They only show the good parts of their lives. This can make their life seem fake or not real.
It becomes more about showing off than being honest.
Being real is more important than being popular.

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Hello, Ms. Judy! You make a great point! It¡¯s fun to share and try new things, but being real is definitely more important than looking perfect online. Honest moments matter more than just showing off.
-T. Sonny
These days, many young people want to become influencers. 
>>Correct!
They like trying new things and sharing their lives on social media. 
>>They enjoy trying new things and sharing their lives on social media.
This can be a good thing. because they set to experience more and connect with others.
>>This can be a good thing because it allows them to experience more and connect with others.
However, there is a downside.
>>Correct!
Some people try too hard to look perfect online. 
>>Correct!
They only show the good parts of their lives. 
>>Correct!
This can make their life seem fake or not real.
>>This can make their lives seem fake or unrealistic.
It becomes more about showing off than being honest.
>>Correct!
Being real is more important than being popular.
>>Correct!


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