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Q : Have you ever helped someone who was struggling with English while traveling?

A : No, I have not.
Since my English skill is not good, I have not tried to help someone.
But, locals in traveling countries helped me by using Korean.
At the spots which are popular in Korea, locals tell Korean very well.
Like Cebu, Danang, Osaka.
So, in the near future, I want to travel other cities that are not popular in Korea.

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Hi Eddy,
Thank you for taking the time to answer this essay! 😊
It¡¯s great to hear that you had positive experiences with the locals in the countries you visited.
I hope you have a wonderful time on your next overseas trip! ✈️

- Teacher Elly~


A : No, I have not.
>> CORRECT
OR >> No, I haven't. 


Since my English skill is not good, I have not tried to help someone.
>> Since my English skills are not very good, I haven¡¯t tried to help anyone

But, locals in traveling countries helped me by using Korean.
>> But the locals in the countries I traveled to helped me by speaking Korean.

At the spots which are popular in Korea, locals tell Korean very well. 
Like Cebu, Danang, Osaka.
>> At tourist spots that are popular among Koreans, like Cebu, Da Nang, and Osaka, locals speak Korean quite well.

So, in the near future, I want to travel other cities that are not popular in Korea.
>> 
So, in the near future, I want to travel to other cities that are not popular among Koreans.
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