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I use Kakao Talk and YouTube the most. Until two years ago, I spent most of my free time enjoying Instagram. At that time, however, a new content feature called Reels was launched, which made it hard for me to control my overall screen time. It consists of short and stimulating video clips. Because of that, I decided to delete the application. Although removing the app caused me to feel disconnected from society and bored in the beginning, I eventually felt more free. After the experience, I often use Kakao Talk and YouTube instead. The former is the most renowned messenger in Korea, and the latter popular is the most well-known video platform in the world.

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Hi Isaac!
Take a rest and I know you will do better tomorrow.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I use Kakao Talk and YouTube the most. 
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Until two years ago, I spent most of my free time enjoying Instagram. 
>> Correct
At that time, however, a new content feature called Reels was launched, which made it hard for me to control my overall screen time. 
>> Correct
It consists of short and stimulating video clips. 
>> Correct
Because of that, I decided to delete the application.
>> Correct 
Although removing the app caused me to feel disconnected from society and bored in the beginning, I eventually felt more free. 
>> Correct
After the experience, I often use Kakao Talk and YouTube instead. 
>> Correct
The former is the most renowned messenger in Korea, and the latter popular is the most well-known video platform in the world.
>> The former is the most renowned messenger in Korea, and the latter is the most well-known video platform in the world.
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