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Hi Hui Jeong!
Thank you for your composition today.
Continue practicing simple sentences so you can be familiar with the structure.
This will help you to be more fluent and also engaged in learning.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I prefer evenings.
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Because it's so hard to wakeup in the morning but in the evening, I'm awake.
>> It's because it's so hard to wake up in the morning but in the evening, I'm usually awake.
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