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Is there a song that reminds you of a happy memory What is it?

작성자: 이*윤
2025-07-17 178

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There are more songs than I thought that bring back happy memories.
The first song that comes to remind is song called BOL'S Journey. This song expresses the joy of going on a trip, and there is also a story of leaving everywhere by plane, forgetting about complicated work and turing off your phone. It's an exciting melody song and relatable lyrics make me happy just listening to this song reminds me of the pleasant feeling and memories of going on a trip.
There is also a song called Tell me by Wonder Girls.
This song was the first time I dance in front of many people when I was 12 years old at a my class festival with my friends, and it reminds me of hanging out with my friends and having fun.
There days, the song I listen to Super Junior's Miracle.
This is also a fun melody and full of happy lyrics, but when I listen to it, I feel happy because it feels like I'm going back to my elementary school days. So, it's one of the song I listen to whenever I go to work, get off work, or drive

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello! 

Thank you for sharing your answers with me. I'm glad to know that there are many songs that remind you of good and happy memories. 
I hope that there will be more to come. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


There are more songs than I thought that bring back happy memories.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: There are more songs than I expected that bring back happy memories.

The first song that comes to remind is song called BOL'S Journey. 
>> The first song that comes to mind is a song called “Journey” by BOL4.
>> Or: One of the first songs I remember is “Journey” by BOL4.

This song expresses the joy of going on a trip, and there is also a story of leaving everywhere by plane, forgetting about complicated work and turing off your phone. 
>> This song expresses the joy of going on a trip. It talks about flying to different places, forgetting complicated work, and turning off your phone.

It's an exciting melody song and relatable lyrics make me happy just listening to this song reminds me of the pleasant feeling and memories of going on a trip.
>> Its exciting melody and relatable lyrics make me happy. Just listening to the song reminds me of the pleasant feeling and memories of traveling.

There is also a song called Tell me by Wonder Girls.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Another song is “Tell Me” by Wonder Girls.

This song was the first time I dance in front of many people when I was 12 years old at a my class festival with my friends, and it reminds me of hanging out with my friends and having fun.
>> This was the first song I danced to in front of many people when I was 12 years old, during a class festival with my friends. It reminds me of having fun and spending time with them.

There days, the song I listen to Super Junior's Miracle.
>> These days, I often listen to “Miracle” by Super Junior.

This is also a fun melody and full of happy lyrics, but when I listen to it, I feel happy because it feels like I'm going back to my elementary school days. 
>> It also has a fun melody and happy lyrics. When I listen to it, I feel like I’m going back to my elementary school days.

So, it's one of the song I listen to whenever I go to work, get off work, or drive
>> That’s why it’s one of the songs I play when I go to work, get off work, or drive.
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