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Personally, I think jobs that deal with abstract thing won't be replaced by AI. AIs are accustomed to handling issues that have patterns or things that require huge investigation of huge amount of database which humans can't process instantly. On the other hand abstract matters do not have repeating patterns so that they are tricky to predict and they are more focused on the quality than quantity.
Some say that AI would be capable of dealing with abstract matters in the future even if it seems impossible nowdays, because how AI functions recently was also the world that we hardly imagined in the past. However, I believe abstract thinking is unique ability of humans which cannot be completey substituted by AI, even though it may copy humans' peculiar capacity.

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Hello, Ms. WooIn! That’s such an insightful point! Abstract thinking really does rely more on quality and human creativity—something AI still struggles with. I agree it’s hard to fully replace that!
-T. Sonny
Personally, I think jobs that deal with abstract thing won't be replaced by AI. 
>>Personally, I think jobs that deal with abstract things won't be replaced by AI.
AIs are accustomed to handling issues that have patterns or things that require huge investigation of huge amount of database which humans can't process instantly. 
>>AIs are good at handling tasks that follow patterns or require processing a huge amount of data, something humans can’t do instantly.
On the other hand abstract matters do not have repeating patterns so that they are tricky to predict and they are more focused on the quality than quantity.
>>On the other hand, abstract matters don’t have repeating patterns, making them hard to predict. They focus more on quality than quantity.
Some say that AI would be capable of dealing with abstract matters in the future even if it seems impossible nowdays, because how AI functions recently was also the world that we hardly imagined in the past.
 >>Some say AI might be able to handle abstract matters in the future, even if it seems impossible now, because how AI works today was also unimaginable in the past.
However, I believe abstract thinking is unique ability of humans which cannot be completey substituted by AI, even though it may copy humans' peculiar capacity.
>>However, I believe abstract thinking is a unique human ability that cannot be completely replaced by AI, even if it tries to mimic our creative thinking.

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