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What is he worst behavior you have seen?

작성자: 이*윤
2025-07-18 89

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The worst behavior I see the most is lying to others.
People may have lied at least once, but there are people who think of lying easily and often.
Moreover, I have seen people who pretend to be kind and nice in front of them without showing that they don't like someone, but when the person is gone, their facial expressions change and curse the person.
While I was embarrassed to see a person changing quickly, I also began to worry that it would be the story of the person.
In addition, the worst behavior is saying bad things about someone or even telling others things that didn't exist. In other words, it is the act of creating fake news or creating rumors. Because such behavior makes the person a bad person by becoming a person who has told a story or done something that he or she has not even done.
I've also been a bad person once, and with the help of many people, I've been cleared of being a bad person, but I think it was a very therrible time when humans didn't believe.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yun!
Thank you for sharing your insights about this subject... as always ^___^
Chammy
The worst behavior I see the most is lying to others.
OR
>> Lying to others is the worst behavior I notice.
People may have lied at least once, but there are people who think of lying easily and often.
OR
>> Although most people have lied at least once, some people find the convenience of lying.
Moreover, I have seen people who pretend to be kind and nice in front of them without showing that they don't like someone, but when the person is gone, their facial expressions change and curse the person.
>> Moreover, I have seen people who pretend to be kind and nice in front of them without revealing that they dislike someone, but once the person leaves, their facial expressions change, and they curse the person.
While I was embarrassed to see a person changing quickly, I also began to worry that it would be the story of the person.
OR
>> Seeing someone change so suddenly made me feel ashamed, but I also started to worry that this might be the person's circumstance.
 In other words, it is the act of creating fake news or creating rumors.
OR
>> Stated differently, it is the practice of fabricating rumors or fake news.
 Because such behavior makes the person a bad person by becoming a person who has told a story or done something that he or she has not even done.
OR
>> Because when someone acts in this way, they turn into a nasty person who has told a story or done something that they haven't even done.
I've also been a bad person once, and with the help of many people, I've been cleared of being a bad person, but I think it was a very therrible time when humans didn't believe.
>> I was once a wicked person, and with the help of many people, I was cleared of it, but I believe it was a terrible time when mankind did not believe.
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