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Q) What do you usually order in your favorite restaurant?
A) Well...I have a few favorite restaurants. I told you that my favorite food is Western food, but I also like Korean and Chinese food. For American food, I order hamburgers and steaks, that seem to be less salty than in the US. I tried it when I was on a business trip to the US, and it was really salty. For Korean food, I usually order "Samgyeopsal" and "Hanwoo". It is the most popular menu in Korean. For Chinese food, I usually order spicy noodles called "jjambbong".

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Hi Mr. Park, you did a great job explaining your favorite foods and comparing your experiences. Your writing clearly shows what you like and why, and you gave good details to help me, your reader, understand. Keep practicing describing your ideas and adding small details like this. It helps you become more comfortable sharing your thoughts in English. I will keep supporting you in any way I can so you can keep improving with confidence.

~ T. Lia

Well...I have a few favorite restaurants.
>> CORRECT

I told you that my favorite food is Western food, but I also like Korean and Chinese food.
>> CORRECT

For American food, I order hamburgers and steaks, that seem to be less salty than in the US.
>> For American food, I order hamburgers and steaks, which seem to be less salty than in the US.

I tried it when I was on a business trip to the US, and it was really salty.
>> CORRECT

For Korean food, I usually order "Samgyeopsal" and "Hanwoo".
>> CORRECT

It is the most popular menu in Korean.
>> These are the most popular dishes in Korea.

For Chinese food, I usually order spicy noodles called "jjambbong".
>> CORRECT
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