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Q) How often do you go to your favorite restaurant?
A) I think we will go out for dinner almost every weekend. Because my wife is worker like me. We go mostly to eat meat or Chinese food. She likes to eat go out, but she doesn't eat much. but I eat a lot. so, I'm fat. I need to diet. I think I'll have to eat go out less in the future to lose weight.

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Hi Mr. Park, you did a good job describing your routine and your thoughts about eating out. Your writing shows your daily life and your feelings honestly. With just a few small changes, your sentences sound clear and natural. Keep writing about your everyday life and goals. It is a great way to practice using English naturally. Keep up the good work.

~ T. Lia

I think we will go out for dinner almost every weekend.
>> CORRECT

Because my wife is worker like me.
>> Because my wife is a worker like me.

We go mostly to eat meat or Chinese food.
>> We usually go out to eat meat or Chinese food.

She likes to eat go out, but she doesn't eat much.
>> She likes to eat out, but she doesn¡¯t eat much.

but I eat a lot.
>> CORRECT or
>> But I eat a lot.

so, I'm fat.
CORRECT or
>> So, I¡¯m fat.

I need to diet.
>> CORRECT

I think I'll have to eat go out less in the future to lose weight.
>> I think I¡¯ll have to eat out less in the future to lose weight.


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