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HOMEWORK: Are you influenced by what you see on TV? Or by what you read?

People in the old days learned something by reading. They learned how to distinguish dangerous animals from plants, and passed knowledge on to other people, times, and generations. That's why people are influenced well by books.
However, it has changed a lot these days. After the spread of the Internet and smartphones, we do not read long texts very well. With short-length videos and simple voices, we learn information. That is why recent people who need to learn learn more learn and are more influenced by smartphones or TVs rather than books.

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Hello, Alex!
I agree that the traditional method of learning has changed since the invention of technology. Despite its advantages and disadvantages, the determination to filter what we learn from technology is important.
Chammy
People in the old days learned something by reading. 
OR
>> Reading was a way for people to learn in the past.
They learned how to distinguish dangerous animals from plants, and passed knowledge on to other people, times, and generations.
Or
>> They learned to discern between deadly creatures and plants and transmitted this knowledge down through generations.
 That's why people are influenced well by books.
>> That's why people are influenced by books.
However, it has changed a lot these days. 
OR
>> But things have changed a lot since then.
After the spread of the Internet and smartphones, we do not read long texts very well.
OR
>> Our ability to read lengthy texts has declined since the advent of the Internet and smartphones
 With short-length videos and simple voices, we learn information. 
OR
>> These days, we prefer to learn from brief videos with simplified descriptions.
That is why recent people who need to learn learn more learn and are more influenced by smartphones or TVs rather than books.
OR
>> For this reason, today's learners are more impacted by TVs or smartphones than by books.
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