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I appreciate more a landscape than a cityscape.
I like nature more than artficial.
That's why I like the relaxation of the countryside more than the city.

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Good morning, Ms. Suzan!
I completely agree with your perspective; looking at nature is more relaxing than viewing buildings. However, the time of day can also influence our feelings. Many people seek relaxation at night, and in those moments, the cityscape offers comfort and relief, especially when the natural landscape is no longer visible.
Aki~

I appreciate more a landscape than a cityscape.
>>> I appreciate landscapes more than cityscapes.

I like nature more than artficial.
>>> I like nature more than artificial.

That's why I like the relaxation of the countryside more than the city.
>>> CORRECT!

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