¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*¼÷
2025-07-23 19

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I¡¯m writing down five sentences a day on my small note and more easy to memorize .
Writing it down helps because I don¡¯t remember check to easy for me

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Michelle!
I agree! Sometimes writing down what we have learned helps us remember it better because we can focus more on the information and use both our brain and hand, which strengthens our memory.
- T. Caitlyn
I¡¯m writing down five sentences a day on my small note and more easy to memorize.
>> I usually write down five sentences a day in my small notebook because it¡¯s easier to memorize.
Writing it down helps because I don¡¯t remember check to easy for me
>> Writing it down helps because I don¡¯t remember things easily, and it¡¯s easy for me to check.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
145114 homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2025-07-16 1
145113 What is something you are looking forward to this weekend or in... À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2025-07-16 0
145112 Can you tell me about a time when you didn¡¯t have much time but... À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2025-07-16 0
145111 What¡¯s something you usually do to fend off stress? À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2025-07-16 0
145110 Write a short paragraph (3 - 5 sentences or more) about a time... À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2025-07-16 0
145109 ¤Ó¤Ó Á¶*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2025-07-16 78
145108 Homework ÀÌ*¼÷ ¿Ï·á 2025-07-16 73
145107 H ¼Û*Çö ¿Ï·á 2025-07-16 3
145106 The homework for 15th July. Á¶*È£ ¿Ï·á 2025-07-16 75
145105 Why do you think the ¡°godsaeng¡± lifestyle has become so... ±è*Áø ¿Ï·á 2025-07-16 75
145104 the quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog Te*002 ¿Ï·á 2025-07-16 79
145103 being a influencer ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2025-07-16 67
145102 Weather change ¾ç*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2025-07-16 82
145101 ¤Ó¤Ó Á¶*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2025-07-16 86
145100 07/15 Homework ¹Ú*È£ ¿Ï·á 2025-07-16 76
145099 Homework ÀÌ*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2025-07-15 64
145098 . ±è*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2025-07-15 92
145097 . ±è*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2025-07-15 93
145096 Extinct animals that I know is mammoth. À¯*ºó ¿Ï·á 2025-07-15 69
145095 Would you rather miss your flight or lose your luggage? Why? ±è*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2025-07-15 82

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04